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Part 2: Tyler watched the range officer walk away – N910

Daniel Reeves turned the screwdriver over in his fingers. Once. Twice. Then his expression changed. Not dramatically. That would have been easier to miss. Instead, the Chief Armorer simply became still. Emily noticed. So did…

Daniel Reeves turned the screwdriver over in his fingers.

Once.

Twice.

Then his expression changed.

Not dramatically.

That would have been easier to miss.

Instead, the Chief Armorer simply became still.

Emily noticed.

So did the shooter in the black jersey.

Tyler did not.

He was too busy adjusting the display on his wind meter.

Daniel rubbed his thumb across the flattened wooden handle of the screwdriver.

There were three shallow marks cut into it.

Not decorative.

Not accidental.

Three narrow lines.

A pause.

Then two more.

Daniel looked at Emily.

“Where did you get this?”

The firing line seemed to shrink around them.

Emily’s face remained calm.

“It was given to me.”

“By whom?”

She hesitated.

For the first time that morning, she hesitated.

Tyler looked over.

“Well, this should be good.”

Daniel’s eyes never left Emily.

“Competitor forty-seven.”

Emily slowly stood.

The old rifle rested on the bench beside her.

“My father.”

Daniel’s jaw tightened.

“What was his name?”

Emily stared at him.

Around them, shooters continued preparing.

Bolts moved.

Cases closed.

Boots scraped concrete.

But suddenly those sounds felt very far away.

“Samuel Carter.”

Daniel stopped breathing for half a second.

The clipboard lowered in his hand.

The shooter in black noticed immediately.

Tyler finally did too.

His grin faded a little.

Daniel asked quietly, “Master Sergeant Samuel Carter?”

Emily nodded.

“Yes, sir.”

Daniel looked down at the screwdriver.

Then at the rifle.

Then back at her.

“How old are you?”

“Twenty-eight.”

“And he never told you?”

Emily’s eyes narrowed.

“Told me what?”

Daniel opened his mouth.

A whistle blasted from the far end of the line.

“SHOOTERS TO POSITION!”

Every conversation stopped.

The range officer raised one arm.

“FIVE MINUTES TO PREPARATION!”

Daniel looked toward the tower.

Then back to Emily.

Something in his face had become uneasy.

Not fear.

Recognition.

He placed the screwdriver carefully back into its fitted slot.

Exactly where he had found it.

“After this stage,” he said.

Emily did not move.

“After this stage what?”

Daniel closed the repair case.

“We need to talk.”

Tyler laughed once.

“Chief, unless the antique comes with classified paperwork, I think we’ll survive.”

Daniel turned his head.

The look he gave Tyler erased the smile from his face.

“This does not concern you.”

Tyler raised both hands.

“Understood.”

Daniel looked at Emily again.

His voice dropped.

“Do not leave the range.”

Then he walked away.

Emily watched him until he disappeared behind the scoring tables.

The shooter in black leaned closer.

“What was that?”

Emily looked at the closed repair kit.

“I don’t know.”

“You sure?”

“No.”

That answer made him smile faintly.

“At least that one was honest.”

Emily picked up her rifle.

The steel felt colder than before.

For years, it had been simple.

A rifle.

An old rifle.

Her father’s rifle.

Nothing more.

He had taught her to clean it before she was tall enough to see across a kitchen counter.

Taught her to carry it safely.

Taught her patience.

Taught her that equipment did not fail all at once.

It whispered first.

A screw shifting.

A spring changing tone.

A piece of metal wearing differently against another piece.

“Machines warn you,” he used to tell her.

“People usually don’t.”

She had always thought that was simply one of his sayings.

Now she was not so sure.

The range officer raised the flag.

“PREPARATION PERIOD BEGINS!”

Emily lowered herself behind the rifle.

Her breathing changed.

Everything else disappeared.

The competitors.

Daniel.

Tyler.

The screwdriver.

Her father’s name spoken by someone who apparently knew more about him than she did.

All of it narrowed into silence.

Target.

Sight picture.

Wind.

Breath.

Pressure.

The old rifle settled into her shoulder as if it had been waiting there.

Down the line, Tyler lay behind his carbon-fiber competition rifle.

His digital level glowed.

The young soldiers behind him watched.

“This thing calculates everything,” one whispered.

Tyler smiled.

“That’s the point.”

The shooter beside Emily heard him.

He murmured, “Machines tell you what worked.”

Emily’s mouth moved slightly.

“They don’t tell you what changed.”

He grinned.

The horn sounded.

The stage began.

Rifles cracked across the line.

Rapid.

Sharp.

Controlled.

The first strings were close.

Tyler was fast.

Very fast.

His rifle barely moved between shots.

Electronic readouts fed him constant information.

He corrected without hesitation.

His group appeared high on the electronic scoreboard.

9.8.

10.1.

10.3.

9.9.

The soldiers behind him cheered.

Emily fired more slowly.

Not much more slowly.

But enough to look outdated.

Her first shot registered.

10.4.

The second.

10.5.

The third.

10.6.

The shooter in black stopped glancing at his own monitor.

The fourth.

10.4.

The fifth.

10.6.

A murmur moved behind the firing line.

Tyler heard it.

He looked at the scoreboard.

Then at Emily.

His expression hardened.

He returned to his rifle.

The wind shifted.

Several competitors corrected immediately according to their meters.

Tyler made a tiny adjustment.

Emily did not.

The black-jersey shooter glanced sideways.

“You didn’t move.”

Emily watched the grass beyond the target line.

“No.”

“My meter says two left.”

“Your meter is standing here.”

He frowned.

Emily’s eyes remained on the range.

“The target isn’t.”

Three seconds later, the wind flag downrange twisted in the opposite direction.

The shooter stared.

Then quickly reversed his correction.

Tyler fired.

His shot registered 8.9.

The first truly bad shot on his screen.

He lifted his head.

“That reading was wrong.”

No one answered.

He checked the meter.

Tapped it.

Looked toward the flags.

Emily fired.

10.5.

Tyler’s face reddened.

The stage continued.

With every shot, the atmosphere changed.

At first, the audience had been watching Tyler’s expensive rifle.

Then they were watching Emily’s old one.

Not because it was old.

Because it kept hitting.

The worn steel action moved smoothly.

The wood stock was scarred.

The finish had faded in places.

Nothing about it belonged beside custom carbon equipment and computerized accessories.

Yet the scoreboard did not care.

10.4.

10.6.

10.3.

10.5.

Tyler pushed harder.

His shooting became faster.

His corrections sharper.

For a while, it worked.

He climbed again.

By the final string, only three tenths separated them.

A crowd had formed behind the line.

Even competitors from finished relays stood watching.

The range officer called the final sequence.

Tyler inhaled.

His screen glowed.

The wind meter stabilized.

Everything returned to perfect numbers.

He fired.

10.4.

A cheer.

Emily waited.

One second.

Two.

Three.

Tyler looked over.

“What are you waiting for?”

She said nothing.

Four seconds.

Five.

A gust moved across the range.

Not strong.

Almost invisible.

Only the distant mirage shifted.

Emily fired.

10.6.

The scoreboard changed.

Competitor 47 moved into first place.

For several seconds, nobody spoke.

Then the range officer shouted.

“CEASE FIRE!”

The line went silent.

Emily opened the action and cleared the rifle.

Beside her, the shooter in black exhaled.

“You beat him.”

Emily glanced toward the scoreboard.

“It’s one stage.”

“You beat him.”

“For one stage.”

He smiled.

“I’d take it.”

Tyler stood.

His face was controlled, but not calm.

One of the soldiers behind him said, “That was close.”

Tyler snapped his case open.

“Bad wind read.”

Another soldier shrugged.

“She read it.”

Tyler stared at him.

The soldier immediately looked away.

Emily remained seated.

She ran her fingers across the rifle’s stock.

There was a small dent near the grip.

Her father had made it years ago dropping the rifle against a truck bumper.

He had been furious.

Emily had laughed.

He had not spoken to her for ten minutes.

Then he had laughed too.

The memory arrived so clearly that for an instant she could almost hear him.

Never trust perfect equipment.

Perfect things make people careless.

She closed her eyes.

Then someone stepped into her shadow.

Daniel Reeves.

He was no longer carrying the clipboard.

Two other men stood behind him.

Both wore plain uniforms.

No rank patches.

No unit insignia.

That immediately bothered her.

Daniel spoke quietly.

“Bring the rifle.”

Emily looked at the two men.

“Where?”

“Inside.”

“Why?”

Daniel’s eyes moved toward the crowd.

“Not here.”

Tyler was watching.

So was nearly everyone else.

Emily stood.

“No.”

Daniel blinked.

“No?”

“You told me we needed to talk.”

“We do.”

“Then talk.”

One of the plain-uniformed men stepped forward.

“Ma’am, this is not optional.”

Emily looked at him.

“Then show me the order.”

The man stiffened.

Daniel almost smiled.

Almost.

“She really is Sam’s daughter.”

The man looked at him.

“This is not the time.”

Emily’s grip tightened around the rifle.

Daniel lowered his voice.

“Emily.”

It was the first time he had used her name.

“Your father was not only an armorer.”

She stared at him.

“I know.”

“No.”

Daniel’s expression changed again.

“You know what he told you.”

Emily said nothing.

Daniel looked at the rifle.

“That rifle was never supposed to leave government custody.”

The air seemed to disappear.

Tyler took one slow step closer.

Even he stopped smiling.

Emily looked at the rifle in her hands.

“This belonged to my father.”

“Yes.”

“He bought it before I was born.”

“No.”

Daniel’s answer came too quickly.

Too certainly.

Emily felt something cold move through her chest.

“My mother has the receipt.”

Daniel shook his head.

“She has a receipt.”

The plain-uniformed man interrupted.

“Chief.”

Daniel ignored him.

Emily asked, “What are you saying?”

Daniel looked toward the tower.

Then beyond it.

Toward the parking area.

“The weapon is older than the paperwork attached to it.”

Emily nearly laughed.

“Obviously.”

“Not like that.”

He leaned closer.

“That receiver should not exist.”

Silence.

Emily’s eyes narrowed.

Daniel continued.

“In 1998, the Army tested a small number of modified long-range actions under a classified accuracy program.”

Tyler quietly muttered, “You’ve got to be kidding.”

Daniel glanced at him.

“You should walk away.”

Tyler folded his arms.

“I’m enjoying this.”

One of the plain-uniformed men moved toward him.

Tyler unfolded his arms.

“I’m walking away.”

He retreated three steps.

Then stayed exactly close enough to hear.

Daniel continued.

“Most of the test rifles were destroyed.”

“Most?”

Emily asked.

Daniel looked at hers.

“One was recorded missing.”

The world became strangely quiet again.

She stared down at the rifle.

Its steel carried scratches she knew individually.

Its wood had been refinished twice.

She knew the feel of every edge.

Every mark.

Every imperfection.

This was not a secret weapon.

It was the thing that had stood in the corner of her father’s workshop.

The thing he cleaned while listening to baseball.

The thing he once let her hold when she was nine and terrified she would drop it.

“No,” she said.

Daniel nodded slowly.

“That’s what I said when I saw the tool marks.”

Emily looked sharply at him.

“What tool marks?”

He pointed toward the receiver.

“Your father’s.”

Emily’s throat tightened.

“He didn’t build this rifle.”

Daniel’s eyes did not move.

“Yes.”

A pause.

“He did.”

Emily stared at him.

The plain-uniformed man spoke.

“Chief Reeves, stop.”

Daniel turned.

“No.”

“That information is restricted.”

Daniel laughed once.

A dry sound.

“So is the fact that this rifle is sitting at a public competition.”

The other man reached for a radio.

Daniel grabbed his wrist.

“Don’t.”

The tension changed instantly.

People nearby stepped away.

The range officer started toward them.

Daniel released the man.

He looked at Emily.

“Your father worked on the program.”

Emily’s mouth went dry.

“He was stationed in Germany.”

“That’s where he said he was stationed.”

Something broke loose inside her memory.

Her father disappearing for weeks.

Phone calls from unknown numbers.

Metal cases in the garage she was never allowed to open.

A locked cabinet behind his workbench.

The night he burned an entire stack of notebooks in a steel drum.

She had been fourteen.

She asked why.

He told her they were old maintenance records.

She had believed him.

Daniel continued.

“The program was shut down after an accident.”

“What accident?”

The plain-uniformed man snapped.

“That’s enough.”

Daniel looked at him.

“No, Colonel.”

Emily froze.

Colonel.

The man wore no insignia.

The colonel stared at Daniel.

“You are crossing a line.”

Daniel replied, “That line disappeared when the rifle showed up.”

Tyler muttered from behind them, “Okay.

Now I’m definitely staying.”

Nobody acknowledged him.

Emily looked at Daniel.

“What accident?”

Daniel took a breath.

“Three men died.”

Her stomach tightened.

“My father?”

“No.”

Daniel paused.

“He was the reason anyone survived.”

Emily said nothing.

Daniel looked at the rifle again.

“Sam discovered something was wrong with the testing data.”

“What?”

“He never told me.”

“You knew him?”

Daniel’s eyes softened.

“Yes.”

“How well?”

Daniel reached into his pocket.

He removed a small brass object.

A cartridge case.

Old.

Dark with age.

The base had been drilled through and attached to a thin chain.

He held it out.

Emily recognized it immediately.

Her father had one exactly like it.

He wore it beneath his shirt for twenty years.

She had buried him with it.

Daniel watched her expression.

“We were in the same unit.”

Emily stared at the brass case.

“No.”

Daniel turned it.

Three lines were cut into the side.

A pause.

Then two more.

The same marks as the screwdriver.

Emily felt the ground shift beneath her.

“What do they mean?”

Daniel closed his hand around it.

“They meant you trusted the person carrying it.”

The colonel stepped forward again.

“Chief.”

Daniel looked at Emily.

“Your father gave me this the night the program ended.”

Emily’s voice was barely audible.

“Why?”

“He told me if I ever saw the other one again, I should run.”

The words hung between them.

Emily looked at the rifle.

“The other what?”

Daniel’s face went pale.

“Not the rifle.”

Behind them, somewhere across the parking area, an engine started.

Daniel turned sharply.

The colonel did too.

A black SUV sat near the outer fence.

Its windows were tinted.

The engine idled.

Daniel’s entire posture changed.

“Emily.”

She looked at him.

“Pack the rifle.”

“What?”

“Now.”

The colonel reached for his radio.

Daniel grabbed his arm.

“Don’t transmit.”

“Reeves—”

“If they’re already here, they’re listening.”

Tyler stared between them.

“Who is they?”

Daniel ignored him.

Emily did not move.

“Why should I trust you?”

Daniel looked directly into her eyes.

“Because your father told me exactly what to say if this day ever came.”

Emily stopped breathing.

Daniel leaned closer.

His voice dropped until only she could hear.

“Machines warn you.”

Emily felt ice spread through her chest.

He finished.

“People usually don’t.”

Her father’s words.

Exactly.

Not similar.

Exactly.

Emily stepped back.

Daniel looked toward the SUV.

“Pack the rifle.”

She did.

Fast.

Not panicked.

Precise.

The same motions her father had taught her.

The old rifle disappeared into the case.

Latches closed.

Repair kit secured.

Daniel pointed toward a maintenance building behind the firing line.

“Go through there.

Rear exit.

Stay off the main road.”

The colonel grabbed him.

“You have no authority to do this.”

Daniel turned on him.

“I had authority the night you left Sam behind.”

Everything stopped.

Emily looked at the colonel.

The colonel’s face changed.

Only slightly.

But enough.

“You knew my father?”

The colonel stared at Daniel.

“Reeves.”

Daniel looked at Emily.

“He knew him.”

Emily’s hands tightened around the rifle case.

The colonel said quietly, “Your father was not the man you think he was.”

Daniel stepped between them.

“And you’re not the man she thinks you are.”

The SUV began moving.

Slowly.

Toward the firing line.

Daniel shoved the brass cartridge case into Emily’s hand.

“Go.”

She looked down at it.

Three lines.

A pause.

Two more.

“Where?”

“Your father had a workshop.”

Emily looked up sharply.

“How do you know that?”

“There’s a cabinet behind the west wall.”

Her blood turned cold.

The locked cabinet.

The one her father never opened around her.

Daniel continued.

“Bottom hinge.”

“What about it?”

“Pull the pin.”

The SUV turned into the competitor parking area.

Daniel’s voice became urgent.

“There’s something inside.”

The colonel said, “There is nothing inside.”

Daniel looked at him.

For the first time, fear appeared openly on his face.

“That means you already checked.”

The colonel said nothing.

Daniel shoved Emily toward the maintenance building.

“Move.”

This time she did.

The shooter in black watched her go.

Then stepped between Tyler and the approaching SUV.

Tyler frowned.

“What are you doing?”

The shooter removed his competition jersey.

Underneath, he wore a plain gray shirt.

No logo.

No team marking.

He folded the jersey once.

Then looked toward Daniel.

Daniel stared at him.

Recognition passed between them.

Emily saw it from twenty feet away.

She stopped.

The shooter looked at her.

“Keep moving.”

Emily’s pulse hammered.

“You’re with them?”

He smiled faintly.

“That depends who you think ‘them’ is.”

Then he reached into his pocket.

He pulled out another brass cartridge case on a chain.

Three lines.

A pause.

Two more.

Emily froze.

Tyler stopped breathing.

Daniel whispered one word.

“No.”

The black SUV halted.

Its doors opened.

Four people stepped out.

Emily stared at the shooter.

The man she had been lying beside for the entire morning.

The man who asked about her rifle.

The man who watched her read the wind.

He looked at the old rifle case in her hand.

Then at the brass token Daniel had given her.

His smile disappeared.

“Emily.”

“How do you know my name?”

He did not answer.

Daniel backed away.

“You were supposed to be dead.”

The shooter looked at him.

“So was Sam.”

Emily’s entire body went still.

Daniel’s face emptied.

The colonel whispered something she could not hear.

Emily looked from one man to another.

“What did you say?”

Nobody answered.

She stepped toward the shooter.

“My father died six years ago.”

The shooter’s eyes moved to hers.

There was something inside them now.

Not pity.

Not uncertainty.

Something worse.

Knowledge.

“Emily,” Daniel said.

But she did not look away.

“My father is dead.”

The shooter slowly reached into his shirt.

He removed a photograph.

Old.

Folded.

He held it out.

Emily took it.

For a moment, she did not understand what she was seeing.

Five men stood in front of a military vehicle.

Daniel was younger.

The colonel had hair.

The shooter in black stood near the end.

And beside him—

Emily’s hands began shaking.

Her father.

Samuel Carter.

Younger.

Thinner.

Smiling.

On the back of the photograph was a date.

Two years after the date he had supposedly left the program.

Below it were five handwritten names.

Emily.

Daniel.

Marcus.

Cole.

Samuel.

And beneath them, one sentence.

If the rifle returns, she has found us.

Emily read it twice.

Then a third time.

Her eyes lifted.

“She?”

The shooter looked toward the SUV.

Daniel whispered, “Oh God.”

From the rear passenger door, a woman stepped out.

Gray hair.

Dark coat.

Slow movements.

She looked nearly seventy.

Emily had never seen her before.

But the woman looked directly at Emily and smiled.

Not warmly.

Like someone recognizing a face from a photograph.

She walked toward them.

No one tried to stop her.

Even the colonel moved aside.

The woman’s gaze lowered to Emily’s rifle case.

Then to the brass token in her hand.

“Samuel always was sentimental.”

Emily stared at her.

“Who are you?”

The woman stopped five feet away.

Her smile faded.

“My name is Dr.

Evelyn Voss.”

Daniel looked sick.

The shooter in black lowered his eyes.

The colonel said nothing.

Emily held the photograph tighter.

“What do you want?”

Dr.

Voss looked at the rifle case.

“That depends.”

“On what?”

“On whether your father told you the truth.”

Emily almost laughed.

“No one seems capable of telling me what the truth is.”

Voss nodded.

“That sounds like Samuel.”

Emily stepped forward.

“My father is dead.”

Voss studied her face.

Then she said the words that turned every memory Emily had ever trusted into something uncertain.

“No, Emily.”

A long silence.

Voss looked toward the old rifle.

“Your father is missing.”

Emily could not move.

Daniel whispered, “Don’t listen to her.”

But Voss continued.

“And six days ago, someone used his identification code to access a storage facility that has been sealed for twenty-three years.”

Emily stared at her.

Voss reached into her coat.

Slowly.

She removed a small plastic evidence bag.

Inside it rested a piece of folded cotton.

Old.

Soft.

Carefully squared.

Exactly like the cloth Emily kept in her repair case.

Emily’s throat closed.

Voss held it up.

“We found this inside.”

Emily said nothing.

Voss smiled again.

“And one more thing.”

She turned the evidence bag over.

Written across the cotton in faded black ink were four words.

EMILY WILL BRING IT.

The range around them seemed to vanish.

No wind.

No voices.

No rifles.

Nothing.

Emily looked down at the case in her hand.

For the first time in her life, the old rifle did not feel like something her father had left behind.

It felt like something he had sent forward.

For her.

And suddenly she understood why Daniel had recognized the screwdriver.

Why the shooter had watched her.

Why strangers had arrived before the competition was even finished.

Why her father had kept the cabinet locked.

Why he had burned those notebooks.

And perhaps worst of all—

Why six years ago, on the night Samuel Carter supposedly died alone in a hospital three states away, Emily had never actually seen his body.

Dr.

Evelyn Voss stepped closer.

“Open the rifle case, Emily.”

Daniel moved between them.

“No.”

Voss looked at him.

“Then tell her.”

Daniel’s face tightened.

“Tell me what?”

Voss watched him.

“Tell her what the rifle really carries.”

Emily looked down.

At the worn case.

At the battered steel inside.

At the rifle she had fired thousands of times.

Daniel whispered, “Sam told me he destroyed it.”

Voss smiled.

“He lied.”

Emily’s fingers moved toward the latches.

And somewhere inside the rifle case—

beneath the wood,

beneath the steel,

beneath twenty-three years of secrets—

something made one soft metallic click.

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Source: Stories of Destiny · Nhan Nhan

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